feedback on finished film 2

what did you think about the flashbacks?

-good visual style.
-clear difference between normal footage and flashbacks.
-it looks proffesional.
-maybe a bit too blurred.


we asked them what the rest of the story is about. on the whole they got this right, this must mean that our opening sequences suggests what is to come, so we are pleased that we have achieved this.

music.

-pace of music fitted editing.
-background beat is good underneath the narration.
matched the fast pace of the sequence.