Feedback on rough cut

Editing:

Positives
Black and white was effective, causes tension (which is what we wanted)

Areas of Improvement
Couldn't follow it, needs more editing for pace


Camerawork:

Positives
The tripod running shot was effective, interesting shots in general

Areas of improvement
certain shots were bit too long

Sound:

Positives
Typical of a thriller, builds atmosphere

Negatives
didn't fit properly (we were already aware of this and are rectifying the situation)

Mise-En-Scene:

Positives
Blood looked good, location was a good choice, effective use of shadows

Areas of improvement
Costumes weren't spectacular, blood on face where did it come from

Narrative:

Positive
Ideas and conventions are suitable

Areas of improvement
End of film was random, flashbacks aren't clear